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The Beautiful Lover

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Feb 2003 · Edited 30 Mar 2006 · 2 comments

Her beautiful lips a red door to deceits house. Enter, be damned

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[8] amanda_dcosta 30-Mar-06/12:48 PM Reply
Cool!
[8] matt door 30-Mar-06/8:18 PM Reply
I like this - last line could be better - still very good! "deceits" should be deceit's. -8-