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The Beautiful Lover (Haiku) by Caducus
Her beautiful lips a red door to deceits house. Enter, be damned

Up the ladder: Pandora's box
Down the ladder: Falling Out Of Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5232
Posted: February 17, 2003 2:57 PM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2006 6:41 AM PST
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[8] amanda_dcosta @ 203.145.159.44 | 30-Mar-06/12:48 PM | Reply
Cool!
[8] matt door @ 65.32.138.73 | 30-Mar-06/8:18 PM | Reply
I like this - last line could be better - still very good! "deceits" should be deceit's. -8-
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