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The Beautiful Lover (Haiku) by Caducus Her beautiful lips
a red door to deceits house.
Enter, be damned
Up the ladder:
Pandora's box
Down the ladder:
Falling Out Of Love
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Posted: February 17, 2003 2:57 PM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2006 6:41 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5233 Comments:
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amanda_dcosta @ 203.145.159.44
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30-Mar-06/12:48 PM
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Cool!
I like this - last line could be better - still very good! "deceits" should be deceit's. -8-
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