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Drunk Satan (Free verse) by smlink84
So you see the long bow, I wish it did not snow Hey does it glow? Alkh hack flack fo Glag slag nag ho Would you like to see the rainbow? Crow Crow Crow Crow On the fifth it shall go.

Down the ladder: On Leaving an Awful Pub Job

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8333333
Weighted score: 4.686235
Overall Rank: 12085
Posted: January 16, 2003 9:10 PM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2003 9:10 PM PST
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Comments:
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jan-03/9:43 PM | Reply
yes even occassionally poemranker has station identifications from the emergengy broadcast system..sorry about that. and no. he's not the sheriff, or smokey the bear.he was the airconditioning guy out of freon and drunk, we had to let him go. 0.
[n/a] deleted user @ 64.213.169.118 | 16-Jan-03/9:47 PM | Reply
Gross.
[0] poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.91 | 16-Jan-03/9:49 PM | Reply
Pointless gibberish.
[n/a] smlink84 @ 205.186.129.184 > poetandknowit | 17-Jan-03/9:37 PM | Reply
You guys take this too seriously. Its just fun to let go sometimes. I don't care about the rating, I just hope you can Enjoy this joke as much as I did.
[4] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 > smlink84 | 9-Mar-03/9:20 AM | Reply
I actually did enjoy it. It was random.
[4] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 > Freethinker1602 | 9-Mar-03/9:21 AM | Reply
Kudos
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.103 | 22-Feb-03/7:00 AM | Reply
[n/a] lastobelus @ 217.226.20.1 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 12-Mar-03/12:30 PM | Reply
bwahahahah it was worth reading the above shite to get to read this comment.
[4] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 | 8-Mar-03/7:51 PM | Reply
ummmmm...sure. Ehat ever you say
*backs away instinctively
you sir have NO method to YOUR madness
[n/a] Lucifer @ 68.48.88.129 | 29-Mar-03/8:27 PM | Reply
It's been a while since you've posted. If I may encourage you to write, I think most of the site would agree that we miss your nutty and sincere flair. When you write again let me know.
[n/a] smlink84 @ 68.98.150.99 > Lucifer | 15-Nov-03/8:24 PM | Reply
I have writen again, but its not nutty.
[9] penguin fiend @ 216.207.132.167 | 20-Jan-04/7:11 PM | Reply
it's a pretty good, random poem, and it's funnier than hell reading what all the anti-poetic jack-asses (horus, poetandknowit, dark angel, lastobelus ) who can't write say about your stuff
[n/a] Goad @ 213.61.217.3 > penguin fiend | 21-Jan-04/12:58 AM | Reply
lololol, oh penguin fiend my dear, post just one of your "poems" on eratosphere. Go on, I dare you.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > penguin fiend | 1-Mar-04/6:00 AM | Reply
Your inability to produce worthwhile verse, or to make any insightful observation, is matched only by your inability to correctly write my name. It is spelled with two hyphens, two equals signs and an underscore. I went to the trouble of legally changing it, so you might as well get it right.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.114 | 1-Mar-04/5:49 AM | Reply
I have a theological question for you, smlink84: Do angels have wings?
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