replying on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie
14 Mar 2003, 3:45 AM
In other words, you agree with me.
replying on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie
14 Mar 2003, 3:44 AM
You think so? I find it to be a lustful, robust, brave, invigorating and satisfying opinion.
And incredibly freeing. It is mind-boggling the sense of lightness one feels when one slips free of the delusion the universe is or ought to be fair and good and sentient. Get a sense of proportion: we are a microsopic fleck on a grain of sand suspended in the pacific ocean. As if the universe does (or possibly could) give a fuck about any of us!
And incredibly freeing. It is mind-boggling the sense of lightness one feels when one slips free of the delusion the universe is or ought to be fair and good and sentient. Get a sense of proportion: we are a microsopic fleck on a grain of sand suspended in the pacific ocean. As if the universe does (or possibly could) give a fuck about any of us!
replying on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap
14 Mar 2003, 1:17 AM
thanks, but this one is unsaveable. It's all teenage homework assignment-ish. That's why it's on the trash heap with a title of repudiation.
I haven't done any writing in 7 years, I'm gonna be weeding my garden for a while.
I haven't done any writing in 7 years, I'm gonna be weeding my garden for a while.
on Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 4:32 PM
Most excellent limerickizationalism.
replying on sexy by elizabethann
13 Mar 2003, 4:25 PM
Holy shit, I remember reading about that in the paper!!!! That was YOU?!?
What happened to the girl? did she end up dropping the charges? There was a rumor going around that you worked out some sort of deal with her where she dropped the charges and you let her keep the goat.
What happened to the girl? did she end up dropping the charges? There was a rumor going around that you worked out some sort of deal with her where she dropped the charges and you let her keep the goat.
on hard as a rock by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 2:06 PM
luscious and lascivious. I read it in all the wrong ways (I know a little bit about those Mayans)
on oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 1:00 PM
ha, very clever.
replying on sexy by elizabethann
13 Mar 2003, 10:52 AM
tonight, dark angel's cleaning out his closet.
snap back to reality, dark angel. Get back to your old rhapsody.
(yo, just kidding, I never meant to hurt yo-ouo-ouou)
snap back to reality, dark angel. Get back to your old rhapsody.
(yo, just kidding, I never meant to hurt yo-ouo-ouou)
on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum
13 Mar 2003, 10:24 AM
one 9 worth of delicious absurdity.
on advice for the heated by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 10:16 AM
oh you voyeur you
on The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus
13 Mar 2003, 9:52 AM
sweet
s/there/their/ in stanza 3 line 3 before pk gets here and craps
my nitpicks: stanza 2 line 1 bugs me because its awkward. why not just something like angels trick the cherubs into killing the stars. or angels corrupt the cherubs and they start killing stars. or something.
and stanza 4 line 1. The rest of the poem is startlingly original, making "eyes bleed black" stand out for it's familiarity.
s/there/their/ in stanza 3 line 3 before pk gets here and craps
my nitpicks: stanza 2 line 1 bugs me because its awkward. why not just something like angels trick the cherubs into killing the stars. or angels corrupt the cherubs and they start killing stars. or something.
and stanza 4 line 1. The rest of the poem is startlingly original, making "eyes bleed black" stand out for it's familiarity.
on The Courtesan by horus8
13 Mar 2003, 7:40 AM
softy. sniff.
on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie
13 Mar 2003, 6:54 AM
bah
the universe couldn't care less
whether we oppress or progress or transgress
but with every breath
it is only to death
it demands that we all acquiesce
the universe couldn't care less
whether we oppress or progress or transgress
but with every breath
it is only to death
it demands that we all acquiesce
on What Have You Swallowed by Fear of Garbage
13 Mar 2003, 6:47 AM
intricate and fractal. perhaps one day you can tell me what it means, for now I am content to turn it over and over in my hands and puzzle, watching for the light glinting off elusive facets.