Re: a comment on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie	14-Mar-03/3:45 AM
In other words, you agree with me.
Re: a comment on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie	14-Mar-03/3:44 AM
You think so? I find it to be a lustful, robust, brave, invigorating and satisfying opinion. And incredibly freeing. It is mind-boggling the sense of lightness one feels when one slips free of the delusion the universe is or ought to be fair and good and sentient. Get a sense of proportion: we are a microsopic fleck on a grain of sand suspended in the pacific ocean. As if the universe does (or possibly could) give a fuck about any of us!
Re: a comment on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap	14-Mar-03/1:17 AM
thanks, but this one is unsaveable. It's all teenage homework assignment-ish. That's why it's on the trash heap with a title of repudiation. I haven't done any writing in 7 years, I'm gonna be weeding my garden for a while.
Re: My friend by Luv2write	13-Mar-03/4:35 PM
This poem is cool, it's exactly the same if you read it backwards as when you read it frontwards. How'd you do that?
Re: Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin	13-Mar-03/4:32 PM
Most excellent limerickizationalism.
Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann	13-Mar-03/4:25 PM
Holy shit, I remember reading about that in the paper!!!! That was YOU?!? What happened to the girl? did she end up dropping the charges? There was a rumor going around that you worked out some sort of deal with her where she dropped the charges and you let her keep the goat.
Re: hard as a rock by <~>	13-Mar-03/2:06 PM
luscious and lascivious. I read it in all the wrong ways (I know a little bit about those Mayans)
Re: oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~>	13-Mar-03/1:00 PM
ha, very clever.
Re: a comment on UNTITLED by bxjay170	13-Mar-03/12:23 PM
stay away from my underpants, girl lest you end like the last little pearl she made her survey but was frightened away by the man-thing she caused to unfurl
Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann	13-Mar-03/10:52 AM
tonight, dark angel's cleaning out his closet. snap back to reality, dark angel. Get back to your old rhapsody. (yo, just kidding, I never meant to hurt yo-ouo-ouou)
Re: a comment on UNTITLED by bxjay170	13-Mar-03/10:45 AM
what the hell is that supposed to mean? I actually didn't vote on this pome, just used it to stroke my limerick bone. Because I'm sarcastic I'm also alone, but I don't shout, whine, promulgate depression or moan.
Re: a comment on UNTITLED by bxjay170	13-Mar-03/10:27 AM
ARE YOU INVERTING YOUR VOTING AGAIN? YOU FUCKER.
Re: UNTITLED by bxjay170	13-Mar-03/10:26 AM
definitely needs a limerick: bxjay shouts over a moan 'bout how much he feels all alone if he "seattled" his soul he'd get out of his hole and so, to the west coast he's flown
Re: Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum	13-Mar-03/10:24 AM
one 9 worth of delicious absurdity.
Re: advice for the heated by <~>	13-Mar-03/10:16 AM
oh you voyeur you
Re: The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus	13-Mar-03/9:52 AM
sweet s/there/their/ in stanza 3 line 3 before pk gets here and craps my nitpicks: stanza 2 line 1 bugs me because its awkward. why not just something like angels trick the cherubs into killing the stars. or angels corrupt the cherubs and they start killing stars. or something. and stanza 4 line 1. The rest of the poem is startlingly original, making "eyes bleed black" stand out for it's familiarity.
Re: The Courtesan by horus8	13-Mar-03/7:40 AM
softy. sniff.
Re: Dust by Caducus	13-Mar-03/7:31 AM
very nice, first stanza rocks & the yourself more self repetition is brill. pickety-snickety: should in the quill not be with the quill?
Re: Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie	13-Mar-03/6:54 AM
bah the universe couldn't care less whether we oppress or progress or transgress but with every breath it is only to death it demands that we all acquiesce
Re: What Have You Swallowed by Fear of Garbage	13-Mar-03/6:47 AM
intricate and fractal. perhaps one day you can tell me what it means, for now I am content to turn it over and over in my hands and puzzle, watching for the light glinting off elusive facets.