| Re: a comment on All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/6:52 AM |
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I'm not sure I follow, a test of what? A test to see if people like it? You can like it if you want, I like it myself, I just have a rule that I don't waste too much time with reflexive poetry because it's a black hole I have trouble climbing out of. So it goes in my garbage can with a self-mocking title.
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| Re: A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz |
14-Mar-03/6:10 AM |
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are you sure you didn't mean "to move forward / we must MOVE our behind" ???
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| Re: a comment on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/4:00 AM |
That's because you're so mean. You have to be nice if you want people to write you love poems.
But I wrote this one just for you, really I did. The third last line was supposed to be "Thinking of Dark Angel's splendid wood" but it didn't scan well enough. Sorrow, of course, being nought but a metaphor for your splendid wood.
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| Re: a comment on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie |
14-Mar-03/3:45 AM |
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In other words, you agree with me.
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| Re: a comment on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie |
14-Mar-03/3:44 AM |
You think so? I find it to be a lustful, robust, brave, invigorating and satisfying opinion.
And incredibly freeing. It is mind-boggling the sense of lightness one feels when one slips free of the delusion the universe is or ought to be fair and good and sentient. Get a sense of proportion: we are a microsopic fleck on a grain of sand suspended in the pacific ocean. As if the universe does (or possibly could) give a fuck about any of us!
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| Re: a comment on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/1:17 AM |
thanks, but this one is unsaveable. It's all teenage homework assignment-ish. That's why it's on the trash heap with a title of repudiation.
I haven't done any writing in 7 years, I'm gonna be weeding my garden for a while.
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| Re: My friend by Luv2write |
13-Mar-03/4:35 PM |
This poem is cool, it's exactly the same if you read it backwards as when you read it frontwards.
How'd you do that?
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| Re: Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin |
13-Mar-03/4:32 PM |
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Most excellent limerickizationalism.
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| Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann |
13-Mar-03/4:25 PM |
Holy shit, I remember reading about that in the paper!!!! That was YOU?!?
What happened to the girl? did she end up dropping the charges? There was a rumor going around that you worked out some sort of deal with her where she dropped the charges and you let her keep the goat.
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| Re: hard as a rock by <~> |
13-Mar-03/2:06 PM |
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luscious and lascivious. I read it in all the wrong ways (I know a little bit about those Mayans)
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| Re: oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~> |
13-Mar-03/1:00 PM |
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| Re: a comment on UNTITLED by bxjay170 |
13-Mar-03/12:23 PM |
stay away from my underpants, girl
lest you end like the last little pearl
she made her survey
but was frightened away
by the man-thing she caused to unfurl
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| Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann |
13-Mar-03/10:52 AM |
tonight, dark angel's cleaning out his closet.
snap back to reality, dark angel. Get back to your old rhapsody.
(yo, just kidding, I never meant to hurt yo-ouo-ouou)
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| Re: a comment on UNTITLED by bxjay170 |
13-Mar-03/10:45 AM |
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what the hell is that supposed to mean? I actually didn't vote on this pome, just used it to stroke my limerick bone. Because I'm sarcastic I'm also alone, but I don't shout, whine, promulgate depression or moan.
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| Re: a comment on UNTITLED by bxjay170 |
13-Mar-03/10:27 AM |
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ARE YOU INVERTING YOUR VOTING AGAIN? YOU FUCKER.
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| Re: UNTITLED by bxjay170 |
13-Mar-03/10:26 AM |
definitely needs a limerick:
bxjay shouts over a moan
'bout how much he feels all alone
if he "seattled" his soul
he'd get out of his hole
and so, to the west coast he's flown
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| Re: Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum |
13-Mar-03/10:24 AM |
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one 9 worth of delicious absurdity.
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| Re: advice for the heated by <~> |
13-Mar-03/10:16 AM |
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| Re: The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus |
13-Mar-03/9:52 AM |
sweet
s/there/their/ in stanza 3 line 3 before pk gets here and craps
my nitpicks: stanza 2 line 1 bugs me because its awkward. why not just something like angels trick the cherubs into killing the stars. or angels corrupt the cherubs and they start killing stars. or something.
and stanza 4 line 1. The rest of the poem is startlingly original, making "eyes bleed black" stand out for it's familiarity.
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| Re: The Courtesan by horus8 |
13-Mar-03/7:40 AM |
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