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advice for the heated (Haiku) by <~>
when windows fog up due to temp'rature changes-- use the defroster

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Posted: October 28, 2002 8:21 PM PST; Last modified: October 28, 2002 8:21 PM PST
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[8] Tintagiles @ 142.166.234.90 | 28-Oct-02/8:31 PM | Reply
Curses. I thought this was going to be advice to God's wife and Blabbit. How could you dissapoint me so! Sgnif.
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 > Tintagiles | 28-Oct-02/8:37 PM | Reply
it is. temperatures change rapidly in a car when one is in the back seat
[8] Tintagiles @ 142.166.234.90 > <~> | 28-Oct-02/8:49 PM | Reply
I did get it, but then it must be too subtle. Unless they mentioned somewhere they were going to meet on the back seat of a car and I missed it. It just seems a bit too 'Real-world' for them, that's all.
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 > Tintagiles | 28-Oct-02/8:56 PM | Reply
actually, to the best of my knowledge, they have never even met in a cyber-backseat. so, i guess it's not really advice to them, but more to those who are budding naturalists, ahem.
[7] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 29-Oct-02/1:45 AM | Reply
This is very practical. Where do you spray it though?
[5] ==Doylum @ 213.122.52.24 > Christof | 29-Oct-02/4:15 AM | Reply
All over the babys dinner, sinner.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 216.137.194.231 | 29-Oct-02/2:26 AM | Reply
Yes,defrost. I like to watch;)
[5] ==Doylum @ 213.122.52.24 | 29-Oct-02/4:07 AM | Reply
What are they doing? IS it travel mastermind. Do they really want everyone to see? Ah no it must be Eye-spy
[5] ==Doylum @ 213.122.52.24 | 29-Oct-02/4:16 AM | Reply
Gillian Taylforth fan?
[6] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.20 | 6-Nov-02/10:39 PM | Reply
Doesn't the fog offer protection? Oh, yes they are moving, or is it they? Maybe "I"? Hmmmm. Hey, what is a cyber back seat, you know, just in case I get lucky? Why "temp'rature"? Make sure to make sure it's not the stick shift!
[8] hipster flare @ 209.68.67.7 | 13-Mar-03/9:54 AM | Reply
cute and suggestive.
[8] lastobelus @ 213.61.217.3 | 13-Mar-03/10:16 AM | Reply
oh you voyeur you
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