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Icarus Down (Haiku) by horus8 Sticky new feathers.
Do not frown at me old man.
Time to touch the sun.
As I freed from you.
I became just what you were.
Swallowed by the Sea.
Up the ladder:
Tupperware-Caskets
Down the ladder:
Padre's Gumbo
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.6666665
Posted: December 14, 2002 6:55 PM PST; Last modified: March 13, 2003 1:53 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.3333335 Overall Rank: 845 Comments:
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vulcan @ 213.29.102.17
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15-Dec-02/6:52 AM
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Marvelous!I feel as happy as when i was up!100
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> vulcan
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16-Dec-02/3:27 PM
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i thought you were a deformed black smith with an eye for forging???
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vulcan @ 213.29.102.17
> horus8
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17-Dec-02/12:33 AM
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I melt too!
this is nice, really nice.
how come so much of your stuff is such inane dogshit? this one almost makes up for (some of) it.
could you be more specific, and i'll try to see what your seeing. As far as inane dogshit goes.. insane dogshit i guess works harder for the people.a
More shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But genius!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whoever gave this a 10 was in need of either a GED or just completely drunk. Have not we established that this fictional character cannot write.!!!!! It is not worthy of more than a zero. I would give it less, but I am limited see, by nentwhistle. We need minus #s.
henh? this is excellent, can't you separate your enmity from your aesthetics? I shall limerick you:
there's a guy here with scholarly socks who takes umbrage when anyone mocks his well crafted words for smelling like turds and thinks poetry's no place for cocks
I have this sudden urge to listen to "Dangerous" By "The Who"
I like it, H8; but spell it 'Separating'.
no! you have undone it, h! some thing has been lost, here. <sigh>
Perhaps you are thinking of it's twin icarus up? or is it the present tense on seperating were as it used to be seperated or is it the new haiku above it, or all of the above?
no. you miss, here. 'my time is coming' is a decade (at least) too aged for I.
so I flew from you and became what i hated:
SWALLOWED BY ARIEL WOULD BE BETTER BUT COMING FROM THE POET WHO WROTE CURRY GIVES YOU THE SHITS, I'LL LET IT GO HERES A 7
I've never written anything about curry, or shit. Wrong guy. Thanks for the seven though. i think you are thinking of darkangel.
Icarus flies like an irish kite. Glad to see non conformity, anorak poetry fucks me off occasionally infact conformist is icarus poetry, down with it.
i like this
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