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Icarus Down (Haiku) by horus8

Sticky new feathers. Do not frown at me old man. Time to touch the sun. As I freed from you. I became just what you were. Swallowed by the Sea.

UnityMitford 16-Dec-02/9:40 AM
how come so much of your stuff is such inane dogshit? this one almost makes up for (some of) it.




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