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Icarus Down (Haiku) by horus8

Sticky new feathers. Do not frown at me old man. Time to touch the sun. As I freed from you. I became just what you were. Swallowed by the Sea.

Bachus 13-Mar-03/12:22 PM
Perhaps you are thinking of it's twin icarus up? or is it the present tense on seperating were as it used to be seperated or is it the new haiku above it, or all of the above?




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