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March (Haiku) by <~> swept clean, up starts grow
through melt and mud: daffodils
laugh, yellow and green
Up the ladder:
Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass.
Down the ladder:
Hidden Meaning
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.0588236
Posted: December 19, 2002 6:29 AM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2002 6:29 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.8134055 Overall Rank: 382 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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19-Dec-02/6:44 AM
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If only it were spring, you tease us with warmer climes. Is melt and mud the season change, my ever fragrant zzinnia?
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<~> @ 167.206.181.179
> Caducus
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19-Dec-02/6:49 AM
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indeed it is. benrice was writing month poems, and i was inspired.
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<~> @ 167.206.181.179
> Caducus
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19-Dec-02/6:56 AM
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p.s.--zinnias are not fragrant. zzinnia hardly ever wears a scent, preferring to notice rather than be noticed.
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UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179
> <~>
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19-Dec-02/7:41 AM
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i think cadacus has a hard-on. don't turn your back on him! this is very nice. daffodil is one of those words that flies off the tongue, as though a poem in itself. 10 swastikas!
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
> UnityMitford
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19-Dec-02/9:26 AM
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Whats a hard on? my brother says he has them and they bruise his knees
Purty.
March is Colorado's snowiest month. So it is good you took this to CT and made it your own rather than leave it out here in the BenRice haiku. It is a desert out here. We need more vocabulary for the many shades of brown. If it were not for the immense blue sky, white-capped mountains and non-native evergreen we would all perish and be blinded to whiteness out here. Very nice in your country.
Beauty, as usual.
Great imagery in only three short lines. This is easily
a nine.
Good stuff! Definately a 9, can't decide if it's enough for a ten...sod it, 10
very nice...
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