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March (Haiku) by <~>
swept clean, up starts grow through melt and mud: daffodils laugh, yellow and green

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0588236
Weighted score: 6.8134055
Overall Rank: 382
Posted: December 19, 2002 6:29 AM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2002 6:29 AM PST
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[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 19-Dec-02/6:44 AM | Reply
If only it were spring, you tease us with warmer climes. Is melt and mud the season change, my ever fragrant zzinnia?
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Caducus | 19-Dec-02/6:49 AM | Reply
indeed it is. benrice was writing month poems, and i was inspired.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Caducus | 19-Dec-02/6:56 AM | Reply
p.s.--zinnias are not fragrant. zzinnia hardly ever wears a scent, preferring to notice rather than be noticed.
[10] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 > <~> | 19-Dec-02/7:41 AM | Reply
i think cadacus has a hard-on. don't turn your back on him! this is very nice. daffodil is one of those words that flies off the tongue, as though a poem in itself. 10 swastikas!
[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 > UnityMitford | 19-Dec-02/9:26 AM | Reply
Whats a hard on? my brother says he has them and they bruise his knees
[n/a] ecargo @ 208.249.92.99 | 19-Dec-02/10:10 AM | Reply
Purty.
[8] poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.239 | 19-Dec-02/10:55 AM | Reply
March is Colorado's snowiest month. So it is good you took this to CT and made it your own rather than leave it out here in the BenRice haiku. It is a desert out here. We need more vocabulary for the many shades of brown. If it were not for the immense blue sky, white-capped mountains and non-native evergreen we would all perish and be blinded to whiteness out here. Very nice in your country.
[10] INTRANSIT @ 204.110.225.254 | 19-Dec-02/4:49 PM | Reply
Beauty, as usual.
[9] Quarton @ 12.217.212.111 > INTRANSIT | 19-Dec-02/6:45 PM | Reply
Great imagery in only three short lines. This is easily
a nine.
[10] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 20-Dec-02/4:29 AM | Reply
Good stuff! Definately a 9, can't decide if it's enough for a ten...sod it, 10
[9] lastobelus @ 217.226.20.1 | 12-Mar-03/5:47 PM | Reply
very nice...
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