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Hidden Meaning (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom This city lies in ruin
With these empty streets
These broken homes lie in abandon
Rocks are all that grow here anymore
No one comes to this forsaken wasteland
Forgotten in its desolation
Up the ladder:
March
Down the ladder:
Parody Of Sadness
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Posted: February 20, 2003 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2003 2:13 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.8134055 Overall Rank: 383 Comments:
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deleted user @ 152.163.188.228
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20-Feb-03/3:44 PM
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i really like it, i can see this city, but it's hard for me to grasp the theme >8
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37
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20-Feb-03/4:20 PM
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What? Like the title says the meaning is hidden. Its not really about a city.
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223
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28-Jun-03/9:28 PM
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This isn't about a city at all. Its about being cut off from everything and everyone. It came from thinking deeply on a bible verse about god's wrath. Old Testiment shiznic.
Good start. please take it somewhere. otherwise good.
Bit diffferent to ur other stuff - wow metaphors and everything- you will become a poet yet oh PBofD! 9
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