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Hidden Meaning

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Feb 2003 · 5 comments

This city lies in ruin With these empty streets These broken homes lie in abandon Rocks are all that grow here anymore No one comes to this forsaken wasteland Forgotten in its desolation

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[8] deleted user 20-Feb-03/3:44 PM Reply

i really like it, i can see this city, but it's hard for me to grasp the theme >8

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › deleted user 20-Feb-03/4:20 PM Reply

What? Like the title says the meaning is hidden. Its not really about a city.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Jun-03/9:28 PM Reply

This isn't about a city at all. Its about being cut off from everything and everyone. It came from thinking deeply on a bible verse about god's wrath. Old Testiment shiznic.

[n/a] razorgrin 21-Feb-03/6:38 AM Reply

Good start. please take it somewhere. otherwise good.

[0] lunar 23-Mar-03/3:41 AM Reply

Bit diffferent to ur other stuff - wow metaphors and everything- you will become a poet yet oh PBofD! 9