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Hidden Meaning (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

This city lies in ruin With these empty streets These broken homes lie in abandon Rocks are all that grow here anymore No one comes to this forsaken wasteland Forgotten in its desolation

Jay J.C. 20-Feb-03/3:44 PM
i really like it, i can see this city, but it's hard for me to grasp the theme >8




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