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Hidden Meaning (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

This city lies in ruin With these empty streets These broken homes lie in abandon Rocks are all that grow here anymore No one comes to this forsaken wasteland Forgotten in its desolation

thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Jun-03/9:28 PM
This isn't about a city at all. Its about being cut off from everything and everyone. It came from thinking deeply on a bible verse about god's wrath. Old Testiment shiznic.




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