affei09
on Perfection Forever by odon919
28 Aug 2004, 1:38 AM
cute
NICE!!
great! i agree
i love it
true.
great job!! i love it!
Lachrymose means cause of tears
hahaha this is really funny. dirty.
...reminds me of her.
WOW!! I REALLLLY LIKE THIS!!!! GREAT JOB
YOU HAD SO MANY UNCONNECTED THINGS THAT MADE IT GRABBY!!!
COME ON PEOPLE GIVE ME SOME FEED BACK ON THIS ONE PLEASE!!!!!!
weird. not good.
i can really relate to your poem coz im on an ldr
nice.
i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection.
but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night
To remind me of you"
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb
I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.