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Haiku № 980

Haiku

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Apr 2002 · 3 comments

will i hate myself once i am no longer used to absorb his mess? someone taste me please existence vindicated by a bitter touch inside, her hand moves as he pushes roughly down the stars glow wildly

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3 comments

[7] nentwined 9-May-02/5:16 PM Reply
oy.
[4] Robert K Foster 14-Aug-02/9:16 AM Reply
may work better as freeform--the images are nice.
[7] darylchew 28-Aug-04/2:17 AM Reply
nice.