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Haiku (Haiku) by Cha no Onna will i hate myself
once i am no longer used
to absorb his mess?
someone taste me please
existence vindicated
by a bitter touch
inside, her hand moves
as he pushes roughly down
the stars glow wildly
Up the ladder:
gerbil
Down the ladder:
If
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Posted: April 14, 2002 1:56 AM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2002 1:56 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.111511 Overall Rank: 13305 Comments:
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9-May-02/5:16 PM
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oy.
may work better as freeform--the images are nice.
nice.
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