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Limerick № 24608

gerbil

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Nov 2002 · 6 comments

There once was a flea from Japan who rolled down the street in a can she shouted 'if you please' i dont like lychees but not in english in japenese

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6 comments

[10] deleted user 11-Nov-02/6:19 AM Reply
The use of the word 'lychees' deserves a 10 alone
[1] <~> 11-Nov-02/6:27 AM Reply
funny. (but wrong rhyme scheme to be a limerick.)
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 11-Nov-02/12:07 PM Reply
mint.
[8] Robert K Foster 17-Jan-03/11:33 AM Reply
cute.
[4] Mystictwilight 14-Sep-04/9:36 PM Reply
umm..ok
[0] cheese.doodles 15-Mar-07/10:08 AM Reply
The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a. This doesn't fit form, it's a-a-b-b-b. Yeah, and it's not very good.