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gerbil (Limerick) by betty swallox There once was a flea from Japan
who rolled down the street in a can
she shouted 'if you please'
i dont like lychees
but not in english in japenese
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Posted: November 11, 2002 6:11 AM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 6:11 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.112286 Overall Rank: 13303 Comments:
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11-Nov-02/6:19 AM
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The use of the word 'lychees' deserves a 10 alone
funny. (but wrong rhyme scheme to be a limerick.)
mint.
cute.
umm..ok
The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a. This doesn't fit form, it's a-a-b-b-b. Yeah, and it's not very good.
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