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gerbil (Limerick) by betty swallox

There once was a flea from Japan who rolled down the street in a can she shouted 'if you please' i dont like lychees but not in english in japenese

cheese.doodles 15-Mar-07/10:08 AM
The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a. This doesn't fit form, it's a-a-b-b-b. Yeah, and it's not very good.




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