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Pimple № 59542

Perfection Forever

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

So many peoples' words i've used 2 tell u how i feel, But these R mine, straight from my heart, these R the real deal... At 1st i thought u could mend a broken heart, I thought the 2 of us would never be apart. But now i see i was just being naive, So let me tell u what i truly believe. I believe the 2 of us R perfection, Of every thought u R my obsession. I know u've been hurt before and i want 2 do al i can do, 2 keep perfection forever, forever me and u...

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4 comments

[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos 6-Aug-03/12:56 AM Reply
Splittingly accurate.
[7] richa 6-Aug-03/8:30 AM Reply
Funny how words straight from your heart come out in rhyme.
I think the abbreviations fit in well with the idea of a pimple
[6] http://mulberryfairy 6-Aug-03/6:44 PM Reply
I hope this is a joke.
[8] affei09 28-Aug-04/1:38 AM Reply
cute