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Perfection Forever (Pimple) by odon919
So many peoples' words i've used 2 tell u how i feel, But these R mine, straight from my heart, these R the real deal... At 1st i thought u could mend a broken heart, I thought the 2 of us would never be apart. But now i see i was just being naive, So let me tell u what i truly believe. I believe the 2 of us R perfection, Of every thought u R my obsession. I know u've been hurt before and i want 2 do al i can do, 2 keep perfection forever, forever me and u...

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.1827645
Overall Rank: 4793
Posted: August 6, 2003 12:37 AM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2003 12:37 AM PDT
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Comments:
[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Aug-03/12:56 AM | Reply
Splittingly accurate.
[7] richa @ 81.86.237.192 | 6-Aug-03/8:30 AM | Reply
Funny how words straight from your heart come out in rhyme.
I think the abbreviations fit in well with the idea of a pimple
[6] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.219 | 6-Aug-03/6:44 PM | Reply
I hope this is a joke.
[8] affei09 @ 202.81.170.187 | 28-Aug-04/1:38 AM | Reply
cute
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