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Paintball's Flight (Haiku) by loneshadow29
Streaks of color fly Those rainbow orbs soaring free Striking worthy foes

Up the ladder: WLPAN
Down the ladder: Perfection Forever

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.1827645
Overall Rank: 4792
Posted: August 3, 2003 6:19 PM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2003 6:19 PM PDT
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[6] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Aug-03/7:35 PM | Reply
Cocaine John Travolta Hallucinations
[3] eliastemplar @ 169.252.4.8 | 4-Aug-03/5:07 AM | Reply
You make paintball seem so beautiful. I feel a lump in my throat.
[9] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 4-Aug-03/7:06 AM | Reply
I got hit on the mask playing paintball once, I stumbled around, into a tree nearly knocking me out, and into the enemies base. My god that was a painful weekend, and as a frequent visitor to dominatris I know real pain. Hmmm, cheese grater on the cock.
[9] LuckyJoe @ 206.72.7.13 | 4-Aug-03/5:48 PM | Reply
I'm not much about Haiku's but you do give good vision about painballs. I'll give a 9.
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