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Paintball's Flight (Haiku) by loneshadow29 Streaks of color fly
Those rainbow orbs soaring free
Striking worthy foes
Up the ladder:
WLPAN
Down the ladder:
Perfection Forever
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Posted: August 3, 2003 6:19 PM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2003 6:19 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1827645 Overall Rank: 4792 Comments:
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
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3-Aug-03/7:35 PM
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Cocaine John Travolta Hallucinations
You make paintball seem so beautiful. I feel a lump in my throat.
I got hit on the mask playing paintball once, I stumbled around, into a tree nearly knocking me out, and into the enemies base. My god that was a painful weekend, and as a frequent visitor to dominatris I know real pain. Hmmm, cheese grater on the cock.
I'm not much about Haiku's but you do give good vision about painballs. I'll give a 9.
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