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Paintball's Flight (Haiku) by loneshadow29

Streaks of color fly Those rainbow orbs soaring free Striking worthy foes

LuckyJoe 4-Aug-03/5:48 PM
I'm not much about Haiku's but you do give good vision about painballs. I'll give a 9.




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