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Perfection Forever (Pimple) by odon919

So many peoples' words i've used 2 tell u how i feel, But these R mine, straight from my heart, these R the real deal... At 1st i thought u could mend a broken heart, I thought the 2 of us would never be apart. But now i see i was just being naive, So let me tell u what i truly believe. I believe the 2 of us R perfection, Of every thought u R my obsession. I know u've been hurt before and i want 2 do al i can do, 2 keep perfection forever, forever me and u...

Jeremi B. Handrinos 6-Aug-03/12:56 AM
Splittingly accurate.




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