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Your Great (Pimple) by scitz
You’re the best you really are, You guide me like the brightest star, When I’m down you take me higher, And you always fulfill my every desire, You always make an effort to dress nice for me, And I’m so happy that you spend your life with me. You’re the one who was in my dreams, When I think of you there are sunbeams. So pretty with a great sense of humor too, I really think I’ve fell for you. So please don’t leave me for another guy, Because if you did I think I’d die, I would slash my wrists and drown in crimson blood, Because what we have is really good, No one understands how I feel, But I’m 16 now and know the deal. Your parents think we’re too young to settle, But our love is stronger than metal. You love me and I love you, So please don’t leave me or I’ll be blue. I want to spend forever in your arms, You really are my bundle of charms.

Up the ladder: Touchdown
Down the ladder: my summer thanks to you

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8216
Posted: July 31, 2003 8:23 AM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2006 7:59 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 31-Jul-03/8:54 AM | Reply
hahahahah!!! oh, yeah. you nailed it, scitz. bravo.
[n/a] scitz @ 62.105.119.105 > <~> | 31-Jul-03/9:25 AM | Reply
Why thanks, I have entered it at poetry.com and think it may win the $60,000 prize. It is my mission in life to pay them $150 for the 'cherrywood vase' that is apparently so heavy I have to bring a friend with me just to carry it home.

Now please excuse me as I have zits to pop .
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 31-Jul-03/8:56 AM | Reply
p.s.--great misspelling in the title!
[n/a] richa @ 81.86.245.13 | 31-Jul-03/9:14 AM | Reply
Get it!

I'm getting quite a lot today
[10] god'swife @ 67.73.29.129 | 31-Jul-03/3:13 PM | Reply
Exemplary. Text-book Pimple.
[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 31-Jul-03/3:36 PM | Reply
Oxycute em.
[7] darylchew @ 202.156.2.130 | 28-Aug-04/2:04 AM | Reply
...reminds me of her.
[9] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 | 9-Jun-06/12:45 PM | Reply
u gotta do this in 733t, dude.
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