Pimple № 58396

Your Great

Member since 2002 · Posted 31 Jul 2003 · Edited 5 Jun 2006 · 8 comments

Youâre the best you really are, You guide me like the brightest star, When Iâm down you take me higher, And you always fulfill my every desire, You always make an effort to dress nice for me, And Iâm so happy that you spend your life with me. Youâre the one who was in my dreams, When I think of you there are sunbeams. So pretty with a great sense of humor too, I really think Iâve fell for you. So please donât leave me for another guy, Because if you did I think Iâd die, I would slash my wrists and drown in crimson blood, Because what we have is really good, No one understands how I feel, But Iâm 16 now and know the deal. Your parents think weâre too young to settle, But our love is stronger than metal. You love me and I love you, So please donât leave me or Iâll be blue. I want to spend forever in your arms, You really are my bundle of charms.

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8 comments

[n/a] <~> 31-Jul-03/8:54 AM Reply

hahahahah!!! oh, yeah. you nailed it, scitz. bravo.

[n/a] scitz › <~> 31-Jul-03/9:25 AM Reply

Why thanks, I have entered it at poetry.com and think it may win the $60,000 prize. It is my mission in life to pay them $150 for the 'cherrywood vase' that is apparently so heavy I have to bring a friend with me just to carry it home.

Now please excuse me as I have zits to pop .

[n/a] <~> 31-Jul-03/8:56 AM Reply

p.s.--great misspelling in the title!

[n/a] richa 31-Jul-03/9:14 AM Reply

Get it!

I'm getting quite a lot today

[10] god'swife 31-Jul-03/3:13 PM Reply

Exemplary. Text-book Pimple.

[8] Bachus 31-Jul-03/3:36 PM Reply

Oxycute em.

[7] darylchew 28-Aug-04/2:04 AM Reply

...reminds me of her.

[9] lmp 9-Jun-06/12:45 PM Reply

u gotta do this in 733t, dude.