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Your Great (Pimple) by scitz

You’re the best you really are, You guide me like the brightest star, When I’m down you take me higher, And you always fulfill my every desire, You always make an effort to dress nice for me, And I’m so happy that you spend your life with me. You’re the one who was in my dreams, When I think of you there are sunbeams. So pretty with a great sense of humor too, I really think I’ve fell for you. So please don’t leave me for another guy, Because if you did I think I’d die, I would slash my wrists and drown in crimson blood, Because what we have is really good, No one understands how I feel, But I’m 16 now and know the deal. Your parents think we’re too young to settle, But our love is stronger than metal. You love me and I love you, So please don’t leave me or I’ll be blue. I want to spend forever in your arms, You really are my bundle of charms.

<~> 31-Jul-03/8:56 AM
p.s.--great misspelling in the title!




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