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New Horizon (Pimple) by Kitch
Their were so many chances I had to hold you. So many words I should have told you, And now I’m alone for you had enough, I showed you the world but not my love. Words I find easier now that you’ve gone, I left it too late, The damage is done, And what is our love but a setting sun? My hearts like a starless night. So dark, void without light. Since you went my life’s such a mess, My nights have been spent with loneliness, And all I said was not enough for you, All I needed was to say I love you. These words in the wind may find you someday, And I hope you’ll begin to feel the same way, For you my love make me cry my love, But I’ll still love you come what May. Let the words in the wind whisper what’s true, That I am head over heels in love with you. I loved you now and always will, Tears fall from the windows of my soul, On to the pallid sill. I’ll wait for you, I ache for you, My broken heart still beats for you. Words in the wind will find the sun, And set upon a past undone, To leave an old day, As I wait for a new horizon.

Up the ladder: Broken

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.285714
Weighted score: 5.0768404
Overall Rank: 6508
Posted: August 30, 2003 8:12 AM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2003 8:35 AM PDT
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[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.171.166 | 30-Aug-03/8:14 AM | Reply
this was sposed to be a pimple right?
[10] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 30-Aug-03/1:49 PM | Reply
Well done. 10.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.175.3 | 30-Aug-03/3:39 PM | Reply
ok, labeled correctly, your the pimple master!
[10] affei09 @ 202.81.170.187 | 28-Aug-04/1:37 AM | Reply
great job!! i love it!
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