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Coming Back (Free verse) by x311
I remember those days
When we'd go get lost walking outside
Seems like yesterday
That you left me to be on my own
I decided I'd go away
And then it seemed like it was all ok
Now I'm back and I can smell your hair
See your face
Hear your voice
Feel your skin
Oh, it's quite amazing
How wrong that I could have been
I had imagined
That I could actually be without you
You were the best thing
That had ever happened to me
Now you're back and you can hug me tight
Hear me laugh
See my eyes
Hold my hand
Yeah, I'm crazy -- so crazy
You're so pretty -- so pretty
I miss you -- so much
We're so perfect -- so perfect
Please come back and we can talk all night
Kiss goodnight
Snuggle tight
Be all right
Please,we'll be all right...
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.75
Overall Rank: 11699
Posted: July 10, 2002 9:43 AM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 9:43 AM PDT
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