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Free verse № 3787

Coming Back

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

I remember those days When we'd go get lost walking outside Seems like yesterday That you left me to be on my own I decided I'd go away And then it seemed like it was all ok Now I'm back and I can smell your hair See your face Hear your voice Feel your skin Oh, it's quite amazing How wrong that I could have been I had imagined That I could actually be without you You were the best thing That had ever happened to me Now you're back and you can hug me tight Hear me laugh See my eyes Hold my hand Yeah, I'm crazy -- so crazy You're so pretty -- so pretty I miss you -- so much We're so perfect -- so perfect Please come back and we can talk all night Kiss goodnight Snuggle tight Be all right Please,we'll be all right...

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2 comments

[10] affei09 28-Aug-04/1:35 AM Reply
i can really relate to your poem coz im on an ldr
[6] MacFrantic 1-Feb-07/7:40 PM Reply
This poem seems to echo delusion throughout. I hope that was your intent, if not...this isn't very good.