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Coming Back (Free verse) by x311
I remember those days When we'd go get lost walking outside Seems like yesterday That you left me to be on my own I decided I'd go away And then it seemed like it was all ok Now I'm back and I can smell your hair See your face Hear your voice Feel your skin Oh, it's quite amazing How wrong that I could have been I had imagined That I could actually be without you You were the best thing That had ever happened to me Now you're back and you can hug me tight Hear me laugh See my eyes Hold my hand Yeah, I'm crazy -- so crazy You're so pretty -- so pretty I miss you -- so much We're so perfect -- so perfect Please come back and we can talk all night Kiss goodnight Snuggle tight Be all right Please,we'll be all right...

Up the ladder: The Deep Dark Light
Down the ladder: Touch

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.75
Overall Rank: 11694
Posted: July 10, 2002 9:43 AM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 9:43 AM PDT
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Comments:
[10] affei09 @ 202.81.170.187 | 28-Aug-04/1:35 AM | Reply
i can really relate to your poem coz im on an ldr
[6] MacFrantic @ 129.82.153.13 | 1-Feb-07/7:40 PM | Reply
This poem seems to echo delusion throughout. I hope that was your intent, if not...this isn't very good.
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