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The Deep Dark Light (Free verse) by seebergerb Before you sleep, dream of the fields
you left behind, the deserts you never felt,
you wilderness you yearned for, and keep
that locked inside your heart, just for you,
and every now and then, hearken back
for the briefest of moments, just to taste
what you wish you always had, and what
you wished, like a locket around your neck.
Up the ladder:
The Kipps
Down the ladder:
Coming Back
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Posted: May 25, 2002 10:41 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2002 10:41 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.75 Overall Rank: 11698 Comments:
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metaphors, don't work together- taste what you wanted and a locket around your neck? Needs work.