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The Kipps (Other) by lilli
after Austin Clarke
Beautiful, sprightly and redhaired,
my neat little girl is on the dancefloor.
She suffers the heat, her high complexion
on an only child a middle child?s affliction.
She is my dead high-stepper, my make
less pearl; light catches her specs and blanks
her eyes. And when she is still
she is not still
she is quick and grave, body of grace,
body of gall, golden skirts, white flounces
and grassgreen smalls. The whole
company, justly, hymns her cheek
even the soldiers, rapping the butts
of their revolvers against the front door
are coltish as they cop her,
beautiful, sprightly and redhaired,
my neat little girl is on the dancefloor.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.75
Overall Rank: 11697
Posted: May 23, 2002 2:29 AM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2002 2:29 AM PDT
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