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corrupting you (Free verse) by skaskowski
if you keep your voice gentle, i just might find
the time to crawl into your open mouth
and down to your stomach with the butterflies
and shove them back into their cocoons.
Just dont worry, my sweet,
i'll slide down and out of your body with ease.
You'll have your release.
And I'll have mine as i twist up your mind
to concord with the images tacked to my walls.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 5.6915636
Overall Rank: 1987
Posted: August 27, 2004 8:45 AM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2004 8:45 AM PDT
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I like. :)