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corrupting you (Free verse) by skaskowski
if you keep your voice gentle, i just might find the time to crawl into your open mouth and down to your stomach with the butterflies and shove them back into their cocoons. Just dont worry, my sweet, i'll slide down and out of your body with ease. You'll have your release. And I'll have mine as i twist up your mind to concord with the images tacked to my walls.

Up the ladder: A Walk in the Park
Down the ladder: pop

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 5.6915636
Overall Rank: 1977
Posted: August 27, 2004 8:45 AM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2004 8:45 AM PDT
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[9] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 | 27-Aug-04/2:56 PM | Reply
twisted.

I like. :)
[7] Brandy_n_Cali @ 4.182.93.229 | 27-Aug-04/9:33 PM | Reply
NICE!!
[10] sliver @ 63.189.1.34 | 7-Nov-04/2:04 PM | Reply
Made me chuckle, actually.
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