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I Can't Move On (Pimple) by Sirens_Voice
I love you and I know it will never fade but something inside me tells me this is all a waste. Even when you make me smile my heart is drowning in pain. I should tell you good-bye and put my past in a box but the thought of life without you makes me stop. So maybe I'm crazy even hopelessly in love Just the fact you might love me too is what keeps me from moving on.
Up the ladder: I've lost my poetic edge
Down the ladder: Alphabet
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2352943
Weighted score: 6.9688406
Overall Rank: 119
Posted: August 15, 2004 4:31 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2004 4:31 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] klosterfobik @ 205.188.116.141 | 15-Aug-04/4:39 PM | Reply
the ending is good - try a little amending though. -8-
[10] Miggy @ 207.38.251.61 | 15-Aug-04/4:43 PM | Reply
nice...just nice, keep writing
[2] kalikopeli @ 63.241.65.90 | 15-Aug-04/8:20 PM | Reply
Move on and seek closure
[5] sliver @ 63.189.17.70 | 16-Aug-04/10:27 PM | Reply
Seems to stop. abruptly. once too many, times. rewrite.
[9] affei09 @ 202.81.170.187 | 28-Aug-04/1:50 AM | Reply
i love it
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