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I Can't Move On (Pimple) by Sirens_Voice

I love you and I know it will never fade but something inside me tells me this is all a waste. Even when you make me smile my heart is drowning in pain. I should tell you good-bye and put my past in a box but the thought of life without you makes me stop. So maybe I'm crazy even hopelessly in love Just the fact you might love me too is what keeps me from moving on.

sliver 16-Aug-04/10:27 PM
Seems to stop. abruptly. once too many, times. rewrite.




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