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this one is for Jon (Ode) by tstormer
I want to get naked with him. Not for sexual gratification, though I fantasize about it often. To be myself with him, show him who I really am. Strip away the facade and pretenses we live under and be ourselves. He is everything I want to be, strive to be. To me, he is beautiful. Even with his flaws. That engaging smile of his, the radiance of his eyes when he's in conversation, the lanky build, the warm personality, his laid back mannerisms, his charm, wit and wisdom

Up the ladder: December once again
Down the ladder: The Case Begins....

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11748
Posted: December 31, 2002 10:14 AM PST; Last modified: December 31, 2002 10:14 AM PST
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[n/a] Ranger @ 212.67.108.196 | 31-Dec-02/10:25 AM | Reply
Are you being sarcastic?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 31-Dec-02/11:00 AM | Reply
I think what you've done there is confused "poetry" with "prose". It's an easy mistake to make. 10!!!
[2] darylchew @ 202.156.2.130 | 28-Aug-04/2:05 AM | Reply
weird. not good.
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