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this one is for Jon (Ode) by tstormer

I want to get naked with him. Not for sexual gratification, though I fantasize about it often. To be myself with him, show him who I really am. Strip away the facade and pretenses we live under and be ourselves. He is everything I want to be, strive to be. To me, he is beautiful. Even with his flaws. That engaging smile of his, the radiance of his eyes when he's in conversation, the lanky build, the warm personality, his laid back mannerisms, his charm, wit and wisdom

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 31-Dec-02/11:00 AM
I think what you've done there is confused "poetry" with "prose". It's an easy mistake to make. 10!!!




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