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Just A Dream

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Jan 2004 · 7 comments

Wake up! It was just another dream! Your fantasy didn't come true! Now go run away back to your team! You selfishly let them feed Advice you honestly don't need! Now you choose a different destination! To find another life for your posetion But you still reak havoc and devastation! Not good - is your expectation! You should never fake these things True love - it never brings In the end - sadness is what it sings And anger may control you by the strings! It will guide you to the previous one But he will reject you And your lonliness will weigh a ton! So learn from your mistake No more - you might not fake

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7 comments

[0] SupremeDreamer 12-Jan-04/2:24 PM Reply

Whats wrong with you? Forgot to eat fish & chicken liver for breakfast?

Strike one. Keep swinging the oakclub until you hit home or strikeout.

[n/a] Everyone 12-Jan-04/2:48 PM Reply

Then why is there spunk all over the bedclothes?

[n/a] Dark Angle 12-Jan-04/4:26 PM Reply

things, brings, sings, strings, niiiice rhymes bro!

;p

oh yeah, one and ton are sweet too!

[n/a] Blindpoetry › Dark Angle 12-Jan-04/4:59 PM Reply

making fun of my rhymes? ..or are you really commenting on them?!

...serious question btw...

[10] Shardik 12-Jan-04/4:29 PM Reply

Death defying.

[6] darylchew 28-Aug-04/2:05 AM Reply

true.

[2] cheese.doodles 15-Mar-07/10:14 AM Reply

You're very right: 'Not good - is my expectation!'