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Just A Dream (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
Wake up! It was just another dream! Your fantasy didn't come true! Now go run away back to your team! You selfishly let them feed Advice you honestly don't need! Now you choose a different destination! To find another life for your posetion But you still reak havoc and devastation! Not good - is your expectation! You should never fake these things True love - it never brings In the end - sadness is what it sings And anger may control you by the strings! It will guide you to the previous one But he will reject you And your lonliness will weigh a ton! So learn from your mistake No more - you might not fake

Up the ladder: Crumb
Down the ladder: ditched by them slowpokes

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9669
Posted: January 12, 2004 2:07 PM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2004 2:07 PM PST
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Comments:
[0] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.161.193 | 12-Jan-04/2:24 PM | Reply
Whats wrong with you? Forgot to eat fish & chicken liver for breakfast?

Strike one. Keep swinging the oakclub until you hit home or strikeout.
[n/a] Everyone @ 131.111.212.215 | 12-Jan-04/2:48 PM | Reply
Then why is there spunk all over the bedclothes?
[n/a] Dark Angle @ 68.101.115.45 | 12-Jan-04/4:26 PM | Reply
things, brings, sings, strings, niiiice rhymes bro!

;p

oh yeah, one and ton are sweet too!
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 > Dark Angle | 12-Jan-04/4:59 PM | Reply
making fun of my rhymes? ..or are you really commenting on them?!

...serious question btw...
[10] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 | 12-Jan-04/4:29 PM | Reply
Death defying.
[6] darylchew @ 202.156.2.130 | 28-Aug-04/2:05 AM | Reply
true.
[2] cheese.doodles @ 70.52.170.79 | 15-Mar-07/10:14 AM | Reply
You're very right: 'Not good - is my expectation!'
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