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Just A Dream (Pimple) by Blindpoetry

Wake up! It was just another dream! Your fantasy didn't come true! Now go run away back to your team! You selfishly let them feed Advice you honestly don't need! Now you choose a different destination! To find another life for your posetion But you still reak havoc and devastation! Not good - is your expectation! You should never fake these things True love - it never brings In the end - sadness is what it sings And anger may control you by the strings! It will guide you to the previous one But he will reject you And your lonliness will weigh a ton! So learn from your mistake No more - you might not fake

Dark Angle 12-Jan-04/4:26 PM
things, brings, sings, strings, niiiice rhymes bro!

;p

oh yeah, one and ton are sweet too!




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