poemranker ::Masculine by temptalia

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Ode № 33186

Masculine

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Jan 2003 · 7 comments

Strong hands with roughened skin, light calluses blanketing his fingertips; his arms welcoming, beckoning, sculpted by nature's toil; eyes that swirl with raw emotion, fathomless depths that tease and sadden with flickering color; thin lips, pale and blushed with cold, wanting and waiting for his lover's tender kiss; matted hair, freshly tossled, boyish looks to tame the virile man inside; a long, endless torso puffed with strength lending support as needed; parts which make him man delicately and appropriately shaped; heavy legs made for sprinting, to run freely in the open fields of springtime; he becomes the artwork from a master artist with finely drawn lines and meticulously carved to the point of absolute satisfaction that gives him the name of being man; masculinity personified to a pinnacle out of reach by any other.

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7 comments

[9] Ranger 2-Jan-03/12:43 PM Reply
I like it, I like it a lot.
[8] wOrnella Mutiw 2-Jan-03/4:44 PM Reply
I like rough hands, especially if they have calluses. Ahh there is nothing like the touch of a rough hand. Thin lips..ughhhhh...how about chapped lips from being out all day in the field?
[10] ==Doylum › wOrnella Mutiw 2-Jan-03/5:35 PM Reply
how about chapped lips from being out on the street all night?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › ==Doylum 2-Jan-03/5:37 PM Reply
Not to mention chapped buttocks. And chapped kidneys.
[n/a] little_angel_maria 2-Jan-03/4:47 PM Reply
this is really good have a 10
[10] ==Doylum 2-Jan-03/5:43 PM Reply
i love this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[7] darylchew 28-Aug-04/2:07 AM Reply
nice imaging. i could almost imagine it.