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Masculine (Ode) by temptalia
Strong hands with roughened skin, light calluses blanketing his fingertips; his arms welcoming, beckoning, sculpted by nature's toil; eyes that swirl with raw emotion, fathomless depths that tease and sadden with flickering color; thin lips, pale and blushed with cold, wanting and waiting for his lover's tender kiss; matted hair, freshly tossled, boyish looks to tame the virile man inside; a long, endless torso puffed with strength lending support as needed; parts which make him man delicately and appropriately shaped; heavy legs made for sprinting, to run freely in the open fields of springtime; he becomes the artwork from a master artist with finely drawn lines and meticulously carved to the point of absolute satisfaction that gives him the name of being man; masculinity personified to a pinnacle out of reach by any other.

Up the ladder: Hells Game
Down the ladder: The bouchon

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3636365
Weighted score: 5.681818
Overall Rank: 1994
Posted: January 2, 2003 11:54 AM PST; Last modified: January 2, 2003 11:54 AM PST
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Comments:
[9] Ranger @ 212.67.97.68 | 2-Jan-03/12:43 PM | Reply
I like it, I like it a lot.
[8] wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167 | 2-Jan-03/4:44 PM | Reply
I like rough hands, especially if they have calluses. Ahh there is nothing like the touch of a rough hand. Thin lips..ughhhhh...how about chapped lips from being out all day in the field?
[10] ==Doylum @ 62.64.208.2 > wOrnella Mutiw | 2-Jan-03/5:35 PM | Reply
how about chapped lips from being out on the street all night?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.35.154.196 > ==Doylum | 2-Jan-03/5:37 PM | Reply
Not to mention chapped buttocks. And chapped kidneys.
[n/a] little_angel_maria @ 196.40.43.75 | 2-Jan-03/4:47 PM | Reply
this is really good have a 10
[10] ==Doylum @ 62.64.208.2 | 2-Jan-03/5:43 PM | Reply
i love this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no no no no no no no no no no no no i love it with a passion
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[7] darylchew @ 202.156.2.130 | 28-Aug-04/2:07 AM | Reply
nice imaging. i could almost imagine it.
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