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Masculine (Ode) by temptalia
Strong hands with roughened skin, light calluses
blanketing his fingertips; his arms
welcoming, beckoning, sculpted by nature's toil;
eyes that swirl with raw emotion, fathomless depths
that tease and sadden with flickering color;
thin lips, pale and blushed with cold, wanting
and waiting for his lover's tender kiss;
matted hair, freshly tossled, boyish
looks to tame the virile man inside;
a long, endless torso puffed with strength
lending support as needed;
parts which make him man delicately
and appropriately shaped;
heavy legs made for sprinting,
to run freely in the open fields of springtime;
he becomes the artwork from a master artist
with finely drawn lines and meticulously carved
to the point of absolute satisfaction
that gives him the name of being man; masculinity
personified to a pinnacle out of reach by any other.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3636365
Weighted score: 5.681818
Overall Rank: 1994
Posted: January 2, 2003 11:54 AM PST; Last modified: January 2, 2003 11:54 AM PST
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