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Broken (Free verse) by psychedelic It's raining men
Droplets stream down my face
Like tears from the sky
The rain stopped
I'm soaked
And chilled to the bone
My heart's numb
I feel dumb
And I can't find warmth anymore.
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Posted: August 12, 2002 9:55 AM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2002 9:55 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.820706 Overall Rank: 10901 Comments:
all you want is to be happy yet you are denied.
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb
I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe. 135 view(s)
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and find yourself with nothing?