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Name Game (Free verse) by psychedelic
Many nights we were as One. In my heart emotions Rippled like the sun. Love is Reflected in your eyes. Love is all that's Inside. It all seemed true. I am So into you. Vague memories are all that Is left of the love you said would Last forever and ever. Little by little I'll try to forget the Awe that flooded when you said "No one compares to you." Pictures of Us fill this head of mine...My head aches and I am Empty inside. The dreams you shared with me are Vast, limitless...I'm drowning in your whim. All I can do is to try to hide the tears that sting my eyes.

Up the ladder: I DON'T SMILE ANYMORE
Down the ladder: Broken

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10894
Posted: August 4, 2002 12:33 AM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2002 12:33 AM PDT
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[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Aug-02/1:19 AM | Reply
Ouch. Girl. You know how to pickem'
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