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Lachrymose (Prose Poem) by affei09
A bliss before my sanity
Thy eyes within me grasp my inner martyr
Hold on still we will be together
Are we yet to last forever?
Begun twas thy look, gazed upon me
A smile i gave, kiss thy lips to fell thee
Oh how colorful were the days, how i envy
The girl who lives there, with you, so vividly
Promises were spoken
Assured as we walked apart
But are promises meant to be broken?
And erased but remain as my part?
We gave love, though we never knew what was it
We made vows only to mask
We didn't know what loves real meaning
Thought our love was gonna last
Everything happens for a reason
Every pain was meant to make us strong
Every tear was the rain on every season
But there's a RAINBOW always after every storm
As i stood, i lie, i wander
As i recall and cherish our ways
Must i say we wasted time and emotion
Or should i keep it close and let it stay?
Time made us
Will time also change us?
Love warmed us
Will love also let coldness surpass us?
I let go now becaue i have to
I set you free, I set you loose
Be another's if you want to
But come back to me if it is me whom you choose
Tonight i shed a million dew
Full of meaning, meant to be for you
But tonight i also gather myself that was lost
When i chose you, and became my lachrymose.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6708
Posted: August 28, 2004 1:29 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2004 1:43 AM PDT
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