poemranker ::mortality by i_am_the_popsicle

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Free verse № 122107

mortality

Member since 2005 · Posted 20 Mar 2005 · 0 comments

certain things about the world are scary not hollywood thriller scary weeping in the middle of the night scary man: I don't want to die old and alone God God: would you rather die young then man: but my life would be unfulfilled imagine all the things I would miss God: you can't have it both ways you know imagine all the faces that have already turned blue not smurf blue holding your breath while waiting for the madness to end blue

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