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NO TIME!! (Free verse) by Brandy_n_Cali
MY EYES BURN.......
The criminal I hold, lurches out to find you. My body lies there cold,
my face is pale.
The selfishness you create has left me shackled to this pathetic world.
The demons that clutter in silence, hold the only key to my freedom.
Visions of my pain, can't go on, can't maintain. Silence is now burnt
away. Your greedy smile proves you have hell to raise.
In the distance explain to me how you been hurt for un-countable years.
SO WHAT DO YOU DO?
You lie down expecting no-kind of innocent return. You explain to me
how and why you have been forcefully crying out in agony.
I tell you once like I have told you before.
THERE IS NO TIME!
But it is the same as usual, you refuse to listen.
Sorry
Your soul is now and forever lost!!
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6114
Posted: August 26, 2004 8:54 PM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2004 8:54 PM PDT
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