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Free verse № 111062

NO TIME!!

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Aug 2004 · 4 comments

MY EYES BURN....... The criminal I hold, lurches out to find you. My body lies there cold, my face is pale. The selfishness you create has left me shackled to this pathetic world. The demons that clutter in silence, hold the only key to my freedom. Visions of my pain, can't go on, can't maintain. Silence is now burnt away. Your greedy smile proves you have hell to raise. In the distance explain to me how you been hurt for un-countable years. SO WHAT DO YOU DO? You lie down expecting no-kind of innocent return. You explain to me how and why you have been forcefully crying out in agony. I tell you once like I have told you before. THERE IS NO TIME! But it is the same as usual, you refuse to listen. Sorry Your soul is now and forever lost!!

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[n/a] Brandy_n_Cali 27-Aug-04/9:35 PM Reply
COME ON PEOPLE GIVE ME SOME FEED BACK ON THIS ONE PLEASE!!!!!!
[n/a] Dovina 28-Aug-04/1:46 PM Reply
I read this yesterday and did not comment because I did not understand what you are saying. Perhaps you are holding a criminal who will soon be executed. Perhaps the person is terminally ill. Something is urgent in time, but what?
[8] sliver 4-Sep-04/8:22 AM Reply
I don't think he's lost, just misplaced. If he holds the key to your freedom, you are going with him.
[9] AM I EVIL? 19-Sep-04/10:15 PM Reply
I REALLY ENJOID READING THIS PEICE ITS VERY DARK MYSTERIOUS