| Re: visitation by Nicholas Jones |
15-Jan-03/11:45 PM |
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How do you feel about the welsh as a people having been, of course, swallowed up by the british as a people and culture with their own language? Was it pretty much the same with the scots and the irish? Are your ancestors from the lost continent of Atlantis? Is that why you cats talk so funny? just kidding...
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| Re: The Left Book Club by Nicholas Jones |
15-Jan-03/11:39 PM |
<Bachus starts the tape deck>
Nick, would it be alright if i played radio head the bends in the back ground? thanks...
so nick are you a communist?
Alot of great actors came out of wales like richard burton, and i think peter o'toole is that accurate?, and what do you think about their work?
especially o'toole in dr. strangelove? 10.
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| Re: Poem 479 by Nicholas Jones |
15-Jan-03/9:36 PM |
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<Bachus enters the room soaking wet, nick! there's a typhoon outside...shit...my equipments soaked..well have to wait for it to dry out for an hour or two before my interview..> [actually i have to go play for some quick cash, be back in two hours..do forgive me...i want this exclusive to be well.. perfect.]
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| Re: Turmoil by ThoughtfulSoul |
15-Jan-03/9:29 PM |
"but yet we are all on are own" are should be our.
"We are together, but yet we are all on are own
The darkness calls through use of wind in the night like a savior coming
to heal our old wounds".
this mass of words should be combined and compressed more vertical into four together sentences like the other stanzas in your poem...and the rest is great have a 7..with corrections, i wouldn't be suprised to see this getting 8's and 9's and even a the rare 10. trust me.
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| Re: a comment on Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
15-Jan-03/9:00 PM |
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Shit, i meant to include this one Mr. North Wind..can you forgive me?
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| Re: a comment on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
15-Jan-03/1:40 PM |
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guess who kept turning around at another table and reading it and laughing? that actor from the movie dr. giggles and la law.ha ha ha! my brain was screaming...he was looking at me and laughing...i was looking at him laughing with tears coming down my face...it was truly surreal. i felt like the quiet american.
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| Re: Goldenshoes Shane by dantron |
14-Jan-03/2:01 PM |
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ah ha ha ha. not a sonnet. nice shoes though. Did you know people akin to shoehorns suffer from the unrepenting desire to squeeze themselves back into their mothers? really, that, and obesity.
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| Re: Im sorry by lonelyguy |
14-Jan-03/12:47 PM |
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| Re: Seasoning a new tank by Cha no Onna |
14-Jan-03/12:29 PM |
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Tell that to the atlantians. Your tank has to much ammonia and nitrite in it. Change your water, and improve your filters. Buy a cichclid to dispose of the gold fish
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| Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus |
14-Jan-03/12:12 PM |
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| Re: a comment on 18 by mikejedw |
13-Jan-03/2:52 AM |
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| Re: Nature's Artistry by Quarton |
13-Jan-03/2:50 AM |
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so what you're saying is...don't talk to strangers..unless they have candy?
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| Re: Another Day by Brighteyes |
13-Jan-03/2:45 AM |
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why bother? we could use the extra oxygen at the rate we're hacking down trees.
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| Re: Daywalker by Blade |
13-Jan-03/2:42 AM |
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you are to soda, what a straw is to ass fucking. did i say soda? i meant cream of wheat.
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
13-Jan-03/2:39 AM |
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666 the mark of the yeast.
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| Re: a comment on Ode to the inafamous dark angel by Lucifer |
12-Jan-03/9:28 PM |
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"slugabeds" a tray full. Have you seen Almodavar's "talk to her" yet? it is really quite moving. I heard you bricked up Settle in the dungeon of tail chasing..tsk. tsk. Well atleast you attract the obviously talented and gifted ones. lol.Such refined taste with their free versed odes, yawn.
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| Re: Thank You Mom by savannah |
12-Jan-03/1:33 PM |
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yeah, thanks mom.you fucking ancient gorge in the side of my mind. can i get a little vagina juice to go with my gaea enima. yeah thanks mom. for your history too, and that lucky scarf. bitch. take all my tens like you burned my captain caveman doll..rotten snatch.w
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| Re: betsy's hands by onepinksock |
12-Jan-03/1:30 PM |
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i have a rule against the word angel in poetry, but this is a masterful piece..have a 10.
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| Re: God and Country by dougsoderstrom |
12-Jan-03/1:29 PM |
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radical. "SWAGGER AWARD FOR MISSILES AND JESUS IN A SUPER COMPACT HAIKU WITH EVEN A PEW TOO" nice one.
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| Re: Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal |
12-Jan-03/1:27 PM |
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add two lines and this would be a sonnet, maybe it already is??
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