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betsy's hands (Free verse) by onepinksock
If she came cloaked in darkness,
moonlight washing only her hands,
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these fingers grow like stalks
swaying from a solid trunk
sprouting from a base where children jumped ship
and hid from monsters.
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Find them curled in rage waiting to
explode
not on face, but on mounds of
clay and spinning liquid string glass from
shape shifting dreams.
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Clasped like prayer without words,
betsy's hands fold for keeping angels warm,
asleep on her palms.
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Weighted score: 4.7310586
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Posted: October 29, 2002 12:14 PM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2002 12:14 PM PST
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