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An Enchanting Vision of Beauty (Free verse) by dalva
She is a vision that evokes emotions of joy
and delight, which stirs in the marrow of
my heart. Like a waterfall, her beautiful
hair flows gracefully down her lovely
porcelain face making its way over her soft
round shoulders. Like an eclipse of the
sun, her deep dark eyes captivate my
attention endlessly. Her soft voice is like
the sound of a symphony, harmonious and
eloquent. Her presence is like a soft
summers breeze, tranquil and serene. Only
one thing is more gratifying than her
heavenly image and that is the secret
person of the heart. The inner beauty of
her heart is like a sunken treasure, only a
few have seen it, but none posses its
radiant magnificence. As my heart breaks
with the weight of sadness, I think to
myself, will I ever look upon a lovelier flower like her?
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11790
Posted: October 7, 2002 5:34 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 5:34 AM PDT
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