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Free verse № 6551

So Cold

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

I am so cold. I need a blanket Of warmth and compassion. But I have none. The winds of my miseries Blow upon my shivering, Vulnerable body. I am naked, exposed. My pain is like ice, Harshly gliding over My figure until It is raw and dead. I long for warmth. I long for a blanket. I long for you. But you won???t come. I will die here alone. Alone with my coldness. My frigid, frozen body Lying silently in the snow.

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[0] razorgrin 29-Jul-02/4:25 PM Reply
you're cold and alone because nobody like you, sweetness.that is because you're a whiny, self-absorbed little fuck.
[n/a] horus8 29-Jul-02/4:47 PM Reply
Jesus christ razora you're beating a dead cat let off i think i want to keep the liver, but if you keep twisting her like that she'll be useless to me for "hemoglobin tea" (excellent remedy for herpes and mooseknuckle drip)