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So Cold (Free verse) by mytenderrage
I am so cold.
I need a blanket
Of warmth and compassion.
But I have none.
The winds of my miseries
Blow upon my shivering,
Vulnerable body.
I am naked, exposed.
My pain is like ice,
Harshly gliding over
My figure until
It is raw and dead.
I long for warmth.
I long for a blanket.
I long for you.
But you won???t come.
I will die here alone.
Alone with my coldness.
My frigid, frozen body
Lying silently in the snow.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11789
Posted: July 29, 2002 3:22 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 3:22 PM PDT
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