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So Cold (Free verse) by mytenderrage
I am so cold. I need a blanket Of warmth and compassion. But I have none. The winds of my miseries Blow upon my shivering, Vulnerable body. I am naked, exposed. My pain is like ice, Harshly gliding over My figure until It is raw and dead. I long for warmth. I long for a blanket. I long for you. But you won???t come. I will die here alone. Alone with my coldness. My frigid, frozen body Lying silently in the snow.


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11789
Posted: July 29, 2002 3:22 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 3:22 PM PDT
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[0] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.174 | 29-Jul-02/4:25 PM | Reply
you're cold and alone because nobody like you, sweetness.that is because you're a whiny, self-absorbed little fuck.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Jul-02/4:47 PM | Reply
Jesus christ razora you're beating a dead cat let off i think i want to keep the liver, but if you keep twisting her like that she'll be useless to me for "hemoglobin tea" (excellent remedy for herpes and mooseknuckle drip)
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