| Re: Advertising says: by Dovina |
2-Mar-05/3:17 PM |
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| Re: Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8 |
10-Feb-05/7:26 PM |
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If I could tolerate beaver, I'd wear yours.
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| Re: Into My World by sliver |
28-Nov-04/7:53 PM |
As opposed to into Uranus?
I'm sorry but this is so ransacked with cliche,
and trite nonsense that it's practically a
zit cream commercial.
For instance:
"Rosebuds seem pale in your presence
even when wet with my tears"
Okay, what kind of fuck munch cries on a rose?
Do you normally walk into a garden and find a rose to water with your contrived tears of woe?
Your an ass.
"Emotions swell when you're near
yearning to be unfurled"
I love your language here.
Makes you sound like a black porn star
named Harry Homellete.
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| Re: A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman |
9-Nov-04/5:56 PM |
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Is there 8 syllabols in line 2?
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| Re: A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman |
9-Nov-04/5:56 PM |
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What about a child of rape?
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| Re: An Afternoon Walk by Dovina |
9-Nov-04/1:37 PM |
Ah "crusty and clean"
Like brain cancer.
the third stanza
is utter crap, but...
I didn't know weaker defense was dusty?
And I've never seen snow with dust, because
dust is dry, do you mean silt? or dusty snow?
Only you could make an afternoon walk, this
fucking confusing.
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| Re: a comment on Mind's Eye by Sean Allen |
9-Nov-04/1:34 PM |
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That was pretty funny for a fat chick.
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| Re: a comment on Mind's Eye by Sean Allen |
9-Nov-04/1:34 PM |
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| Re: Mind's Eye by Sean Allen |
9-Nov-04/1:33 PM |
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I was hoping for shit, but found a modicum of shine.
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| Re: Silly sickness by fevriere |
9-Nov-04/1:32 PM |
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I feel the same way about dung beatles.
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| Re: a comment on "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus |
9-Nov-04/1:13 PM |
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| Re: keep on digging by nentwined |
9-Nov-04/1:10 PM |
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| Re: Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge |
9-Nov-04/1:09 PM |
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| Re: The Roses by poetryman |
9-Nov-04/1:08 PM |
"strong and erect"
You're obviously, a gay.
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| Re: The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins |
8-Nov-04/12:44 PM |
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| Re: Geometry for Dyslexics by zodiac |
7-Nov-04/11:35 PM |
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That was a mouthful of muscle.
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| Re: Market Day in Al-Karak, South Jordan by zodiac |
21-Oct-04/11:13 AM |
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| Re: Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
21-Oct-04/11:00 AM |
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| Re: Many Thanks by Dovina |
23-Sep-04/6:06 PM |
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| Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose |
23-Sep-04/1:36 PM |
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The Nuding Hose By The Parson's Nose
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