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23-Sep-04/1:38 PM |
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Want a popper big bopper?
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| Re: Many Thanks by Dovina |
23-Sep-04/6:06 PM |
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| Re: Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
21-Oct-04/11:00 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
21-Oct-04/11:13 AM |
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| Re: Market Day in Al-Karak, South Jordan by zodiac |
21-Oct-04/11:13 AM |
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| Re: Geometry for Dyslexics by zodiac |
7-Nov-04/11:35 PM |
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That was a mouthful of muscle.
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| Re: The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins |
8-Nov-04/12:44 PM |
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| Re: The Roses by poetryman |
9-Nov-04/1:08 PM |
"strong and erect"
You're obviously, a gay.
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| Re: Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge |
9-Nov-04/1:09 PM |
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| Re: keep on digging by nentwined |
9-Nov-04/1:10 PM |
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| Re: Silly sickness by fevriere |
9-Nov-04/1:32 PM |
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I feel the same way about dung beatles.
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| Re: Mind's Eye by Sean Allen |
9-Nov-04/1:33 PM |
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I was hoping for shit, but found a modicum of shine.
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| Re: An Afternoon Walk by Dovina |
9-Nov-04/1:37 PM |
Ah "crusty and clean"
Like brain cancer.
the third stanza
is utter crap, but...
I didn't know weaker defense was dusty?
And I've never seen snow with dust, because
dust is dry, do you mean silt? or dusty snow?
Only you could make an afternoon walk, this
fucking confusing.
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| Re: A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman |
9-Nov-04/5:56 PM |
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What about a child of rape?
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| Re: A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman |
9-Nov-04/5:56 PM |
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Is there 8 syllabols in line 2?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Nov-04/11:49 AM |
I was banned at AP for threedays for passing gas
in the mouth of another, pray for me.
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| Re: Into My World by sliver |
28-Nov-04/7:53 PM |
As opposed to into Uranus?
I'm sorry but this is so ransacked with cliche,
and trite nonsense that it's practically a
zit cream commercial.
For instance:
"Rosebuds seem pale in your presence
even when wet with my tears"
Okay, what kind of fuck munch cries on a rose?
Do you normally walk into a garden and find a rose to water with your contrived tears of woe?
Your an ass.
"Emotions swell when you're near
yearning to be unfurled"
I love your language here.
Makes you sound like a black porn star
named Harry Homellete.
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| Re: Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8 |
10-Feb-05/7:26 PM |
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If I could tolerate beaver, I'd wear yours.
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2-Mar-05/3:15 PM |
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| Re: Advertising says: by Dovina |
2-Mar-05/3:17 PM |
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