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Another Day (Free verse) by Brighteyes When can one self claim
all of their fantasies?
What if the rain
never stops?
Could have one sweet chance
not to erase the hope.
Well if I feel I will...
Falling asleep,
I cannot stay awake.
Wish I could live to see
another day...
When can one self hope
to be more than the dream?
Where does the wish
finally end?
Should be more than luck
that brings me here to-day.
Well it's not I'll die...
Falling asleep,
I cannot stay in time...
Wish I could stay awake,
another day...
Up the ladder:
The Case Begins....
Down the ladder:
Where is My BabyGirl?
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Posted: January 13, 2003 12:39 AM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2003 12:39 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.7317934 Overall Rank: 11750 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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13-Jan-03/2:45 AM
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why bother? we could use the extra oxygen at the rate we're hacking down trees.
sounds troubled--like a therapy poem. I hope you are feeling better, but you should keep therapy poems to yourself--too often thet sound exactly like this and come across as trite.
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