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Where is My BabyGirl? (Free verse) by ChunkyHunkyMonkey Where is my BabyGirl?
At the park, no
At the beach, no
At her house, no
At our secret spot, no
At the school dance,no
In front of my house, no
At her best friend's house, no
On a plane to hawaii, no
In the heavens, no
well if she is not anywhere and she is not dead where is she?
Oh i know where she is,
she is in my heart always has and always will be
I know this poem seems silly this was one of my 1st poems ever and i
know it seems kind of corny but oh well
Up the ladder:
Another Day
Down the ladder:
Waiting Patiently
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Posted: January 13, 2003 6:11 PM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2003 6:11 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7317934 Overall Rank: 11756 Comments:
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Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154
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13-Jan-03/6:23 PM
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made into vellum. your rasp is a rasp-berry.
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<~> @ 67.84.171.238
> Jeremi B. Handrinos
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13-Jan-03/6:25 PM
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a calligraphied lampshade, the likes of which none have seen. ever.
I thought this was crap until I read the last line of it (the poem, not the bit at the bottom). It really hit me-I don't know why, but still I will give you a nine.
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