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Where is My BabyGirl? (Free verse) by ChunkyHunkyMonkey

Where is my BabyGirl? At the park, no At the beach, no At her house, no At our secret spot, no At the school dance,no In front of my house, no At her best friend's house, no On a plane to hawaii, no In the heavens, no well if she is not anywhere and she is not dead where is she? Oh i know where she is, she is in my heart always has and always will be I know this poem seems silly this was one of my 1st poems ever and i know it seems kind of corny but oh well

Ranger 14-Jan-03/6:38 AM
I thought this was crap until I read the last line of it (the poem, not the bit at the bottom). It really hit me-I don't know why, but still I will give you a nine.




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