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Waiting Patiently (Free verse) by Sarahmarie
Fairy-tale romances Overrated? Maybe It is what I long for The movie star love stare The roses sent to my house To my work Left on my car The most thoughtful gifts Not the most expensive The "never forget" proposal The one I will think of 50 years down the road and still cry The elegant wedding The "happy-ever-after" life It may be too much to ask I don't care It will happen I can feel it.

Up the ladder: Where is My BabyGirl?
Down the ladder: wanker

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11752
Posted: January 21, 2003 2:22 PM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2003 2:22 PM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.112.224.232 | 21-Jan-03/2:34 PM | Reply
Funny stuff!
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Jan-03/7:10 PM | Reply
Indeed, this is a bottle of diet horse piss.
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