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Waiting Patiently

by Sarahmarie

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

Fairy-tale romances Overrated? Maybe It is what I long for The movie star love stare The roses sent to my house To my work Left on my car The most thoughtful gifts Not the most expensive The "never forget" proposal The one I will think of 50 years down the road and still cry The elegant wedding The "happy-ever-after" life It may be too much to ask I don't care It will happen I can feel it.

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[n/a] deleted user 21-Jan-03/2:34 PM Reply
Funny stuff!
[6] horus8 21-Jan-03/7:10 PM Reply
Indeed, this is a bottle of diet horse piss.