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Goldenshoes Shane (Sonnet) by dantron
Oh not again......shane cried mother as she ran to the bus shelter.... SHANE you'v ruined your fucking shoes for the last time! and with that, they took to the shops, shane was to be bought some wonda-shoes which were......golden!

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.1666665
Weighted score: 4.3907847
Overall Rank: 13008
Posted: January 14, 2003 1:34 PM PST; Last modified: January 14, 2003 1:34 PM PST
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[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Jan-03/2:01 PM | Reply
ah ha ha ha. not a sonnet. nice shoes though. Did you know people akin to shoehorns suffer from the unrepenting desire to squeeze themselves back into their mothers? really, that, and obesity.
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.43 | 14-Jan-03/2:15 PM | Reply
them's some fancy-ass shoes.
[9] poemwanker @ 212.219.142.161 | 15-Jan-03/12:51 AM | Reply
Oh, poor, poor Shane-y!
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Aug-03/11:32 AM | Reply
Yes! NO!!!!!! 0.
[1] Angelicasassy @ 72.40.4.69 | 5-Feb-06/7:15 PM | Reply
uhm, I don't like this.
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