poemranker ::Goldenshoes Shane by dantron

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Sonnet № 35965

Goldenshoes Shane

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Jan 2003 · 5 comments

Oh not again......shane cried mother as she ran to the bus shelter.... SHANE you'v ruined your fucking shoes for the last time! and with that, they took to the shops, shane was to be bought some wonda-shoes which were......golden!

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[7] Bachus 14-Jan-03/2:01 PM Reply
ah ha ha ha. not a sonnet. nice shoes though. Did you know people akin to shoehorns suffer from the unrepenting desire to squeeze themselves back into their mothers? really, that, and obesity.
[n/a] razorgrin 14-Jan-03/2:15 PM Reply
them's some fancy-ass shoes.
[9] poemwanker 15-Jan-03/12:51 AM Reply
Oh, poor, poor Shane-y!
[0] horus8 15-Aug-03/11:32 AM Reply
Yes! NO!!!!!! 0.
[1] Angelicasassy 5-Feb-06/7:15 PM Reply
uhm, I don't like this.