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why?

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2002 · 11 comments

Why are these tears in my eyes, I feel so ashamed, so used, so hated, why did you do this to me Mesen, why did you touch me places you wasn't allowed to, why did you grab my neck, why did you pull me close and did dirty things to me. Why did you do it, I was only 14 and you were my best friends dad. How could you do this to me, I hate you so much you dirty bustard. I wish your family would believe what i'm saying, They'd see what a fucked up prick you are, Why did you call me a liar at court, why did you hire a lawyer, did you get scared out of your pants is that why. You know i don't care if i win or lose, because you'll be judged far worse somewhere else when you die and god is far worse than the court, he knows thats true and whats not so dont fucking try and deny it to him. *ps. this is my true story not a very good poem but it's expressing my feelings right now:(*

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[7] INTRANSIT 3-Oct-02/2:15 PM Reply

As long as you continue to FEEL, your poetry will be fine. I'm sorry for your pain.

[n/a] little_angel_maria › INTRANSIT 11-Oct-02/10:30 AM Reply

thank you *hug*

[n/a] god'swife 9-Oct-02/8:32 PM Reply

I just want to let you know I'm very proud of you for being able to share what happened to you. You should contact www.rainn.org. they'd love to hear from you. Get all the support you need. I know exactly what you're going through.

[n/a] little_angel_maria › god'swife 11-Oct-02/10:32 AM Reply

thank you *hug*

[n/a] Tascobar › little_angel_maria 15-Nov-02/7:44 AM Reply

*kiss kiss*

[n/a] Christof 10-Oct-02/2:38 AM Reply

This is a terrible story. You really should get some help from somewhere. Listen to god'swife's advice.

[n/a] little_angel_maria › Christof 11-Oct-02/10:31 AM Reply

thank you *hug*

[n/a] Tascobar › little_angel_maria 15-Nov-02/7:45 AM Reply

whoops just *came*

[1] Tyriana 15-Oct-02/2:02 PM Reply

I agree you should get help. Mostly in your writing though. Tell it to some therapist, darling. They can be paid to care.

[5] -=SeTTle=- 27-Oct-02/12:06 AM Reply

Thou dosth protest too much.

[6] horus8 18-Jan-03/5:15 PM Reply

ski jumping is for adults young lady, REPENT IN THE NAME OF JESUS! <body starts to twist and gyrate whilst banging the vulve with the christ doll haaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!> sorry just be moving along now.